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枫下拾英 / 乐韵书香 / Please edit for me. Your help will make my life better.
-go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!);
2004-2-20
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up?
-go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!);
2004-2-20
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any body?
-go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!);
2004-2-20
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蚯蚓, make a good ad, it could be a good business.
-charleslike(Unionville-愚人);
2004-2-20
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Do I make my point? Is it easy to understand?
-go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!);
2004-2-20
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It is unstandable but you may want to put words like "Save money, Save water, Save Time, Real Green" . Anyone here knows how to do marketing?
-charleslike(Unionville-愚人);
2004-2-20
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yes you're right, don't save $$ in advertisement, he'll find it's very rewarding.Ask some agent to write a pretty ads for his business, and put them on the local newspaper or magazine. The better the form is, the more business opportunities can be generated - this works for the western customers especially.
-secretgarden(跳跳蓝莓);
2004-2-20
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I have asked my Canadian friends too. One of them is the editor of The Blazing Star Magazine.
-go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!);
2004-2-20
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Here you go. Wish you success in your endeavours! I feel this will be a good business, and you can focus on the rich customers too. My boss uses a garderning company for his house and paid lots of money each month.
-secretgarden(跳跳蓝莓);
2004-2-20
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Could you recommend my business to him? I know what I am doing.
-go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!);
2004-2-20
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-beibei(beibei);
2004-2-20
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^_^
-go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!);
2004-2-21
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I would like Chinese to understand my plain English too.
-go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!);
2004-2-20
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Is It a poem?:)
-jennycc(远鸽);
2004-2-20
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Similar to yours?
-charleslike(Unionville-愚人);
2004-2-20
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What do u think:}
-jennycc(远鸽);
2004-2-20
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Yours are sweet and his smells(organic).
-charleslike(Unionville-愚人);
2004-2-21
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QQ
-go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!);
2004-2-21
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No. It is a lawn care ad for making a living.
-go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!);
2004-2-20
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I seeDo you need fertilizer,I can supply :)
-jennycc(远鸽);
2004-2-20
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Organic?
-go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!);
2004-2-20
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Earthworm Works! ~~~~~~~~EdibleScape’s Organic-Plus-Lawn Care makes sure your lawn works hard for you. (Adited)
-go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!);
2004-2-21
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With less or no water, your lawn will never over grow，不懂， It will never overgrow with no water anyway.
-charleslike(Unionville-愚人);
2004-2-21
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I mean: (With less or no water, your lawn will stay health and never over grow). Thanks.
-go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!);
2004-2-21
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觉得文字太密集了-1.所有的"WE"可以去掉.2.用短句.3.加重"形象设计", FLYER的PRESENTATION和图片的LAYOUT是关键. 4.打乱重组.(见内)
-labelle(桃谷小仙);
2004-2-22
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太棒了. 快刀斩乱麻, DX一定是行家.
-go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!);
2004-2-22
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俺修改后, 能把俺的原件发到DX信箱来吗, 一定有重谢
-go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!);
2004-2-22
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愿意帮忙,不客气:-)
-labelle(桃谷小仙);
2004-2-22
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马上, 马上修改.
-go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!);
2004-2-22
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check your email.
-go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!);
2004-2-22
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收到俺的email 吗? 今天的太阳难得, 出去享受享受.
-go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!);
2004-2-22
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Earthworm Works! ~~~~~~~~EdibleScape’s Organic-Plus-Lawn Care makes sure your lawn works hard for you. (Adited again)
-go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!);
2004-2-21
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stay "healthy" ; Your earthworms make (a) living "by aerating" your soil; nature predators - 似乎不如直接说“bio-control agents".
-patpat(侃侃伐坛);
2004-2-22
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我的感觉是,作为广告, 这篇实在太长太罗嗦. 需要大幅度删减.
-anniezhang(铁皮屋顶上的猫);
2004-2-22
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桃谷小仙~~(#1615908)~~正运气发威~~百炼成钢.
-go4nature(蚯蚓 @@ 花木称知己!);
2004-2-22
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hehe, 你真可爱!看一下我对你发给我的文本的一点小修改(见EMAIL)
-labelle(桃谷小仙);
2004-2-22
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