本文发表在 rolia.net 枫下论坛a thank you NOTE/letter merely serves to say thanks and perhaps briefly remind HR of you. A several-liner will do and a personal touch is very important. Focus all your efforts during interview, especially the first 30 seconds. I am of different opinon about a few points.
"Personal letter的形式可以起到沟通感情、建立rapport的作用。"---> This is probably true for HR/Mgr of an older age. If it goes to a young HR/Mgr(in most cases) , the risk is that they feel bombed upon seeing it so long and never even attempt to read. A brief email/note serve the purpose I believe.
2.对未来老板的工作成绩或事业成就表示赞赏,这样能进一步沟通感情、建立rapport。但要发自真诚,恰到好处。切忌说过头话。-->would not recommend commenting so. Beware that you may not be IN A POSITION to comment on the achievement of someone high above if you apply for only a junior position. A hostess of a high social status and good wealth would be seriously offended if you ever attempt to complement her cooking or her property. It is taken for granted that everything of hers is devine and perfect. She does not expect/need YOU to complement, never. Same is the case with career achievemnent. Be senstiive to the wordly difference of ranking and social class.
Instead, given short time, one feels more comfortable when one finds the other party mirrors oneself . So, briefly drawing attention to some common traits would established rapprt more effectively. Again, you should do that at the interview.
4.清晰无误地列明你对该职位及其职责范围的理解。-->not likely necessary. Risk is that you may misunderstand if you did not listen or read correctly what HR describe to you the job duties at the interview. Practically you would not have full understanding of a position until you are 1-3 months into the job. Not now, you should have discussed it freely at interview already. Communicaiton was done. Why repeat?
5.再次强力促销你的soft skills (communication skills, personal skills, self-promoting skills and personalities etc.)和hard skills(工作经验)。如同在面试中回答behavioral questions一样,在推销自己时要举例子,例子不能和所申请的职位不搭边。关于如何应对behavioral questions,可以参考贴子“如何在北美找工作面试”。--->if everybody writes so, nobody's will be read. Again, you should have discussed it freely at interview with good examples and you should have demonstrated at the interview through oral communication, eye contact, body language and tone of your voice already. It is almost possible to change a person's 1st impression about you obtained in the 1st 30 seconds. Communicaiton was done. Why repeat? It is not fair competition that you would rely on a thank you letter at a later time to make up for your communication not sufficienly demonstrated at the time of interview.
Instead, why don't you briefly mention one thing that does interest you from talk with hr/mgr to
1.make your letter personal
2. show that you are proactive with new information and you effectively listened, understodd and reflected
2.build continuous rapport,
"再次表达你对获取该职位的热情"--->yes, need to do so, but do it with style. Be very confident and express it in a polite but silently aggressive way. e.g " I look forward to hearing from you soon as this position is top listed among my other job applications. Should you need any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me by ...."
At last, don't forget to add a nice wish with some personal touch, say, if HR has mentioned to you that she will be on vacation soon in Cuba, say "wish you enjoy you a lovely cruise in Cuba!" the more specific the better. Such personal attention would win a heart a bit.更多精彩文章及讨论,请光临枫下论坛 rolia.net
"Personal letter的形式可以起到沟通感情、建立rapport的作用。"---> This is probably true for HR/Mgr of an older age. If it goes to a young HR/Mgr(in most cases) , the risk is that they feel bombed upon seeing it so long and never even attempt to read. A brief email/note serve the purpose I believe.
2.对未来老板的工作成绩或事业成就表示赞赏,这样能进一步沟通感情、建立rapport。但要发自真诚,恰到好处。切忌说过头话。-->would not recommend commenting so. Beware that you may not be IN A POSITION to comment on the achievement of someone high above if you apply for only a junior position. A hostess of a high social status and good wealth would be seriously offended if you ever attempt to complement her cooking or her property. It is taken for granted that everything of hers is devine and perfect. She does not expect/need YOU to complement, never. Same is the case with career achievemnent. Be senstiive to the wordly difference of ranking and social class.
Instead, given short time, one feels more comfortable when one finds the other party mirrors oneself . So, briefly drawing attention to some common traits would established rapprt more effectively. Again, you should do that at the interview.
4.清晰无误地列明你对该职位及其职责范围的理解。-->not likely necessary. Risk is that you may misunderstand if you did not listen or read correctly what HR describe to you the job duties at the interview. Practically you would not have full understanding of a position until you are 1-3 months into the job. Not now, you should have discussed it freely at interview already. Communicaiton was done. Why repeat?
5.再次强力促销你的soft skills (communication skills, personal skills, self-promoting skills and personalities etc.)和hard skills(工作经验)。如同在面试中回答behavioral questions一样,在推销自己时要举例子,例子不能和所申请的职位不搭边。关于如何应对behavioral questions,可以参考贴子“如何在北美找工作面试”。--->if everybody writes so, nobody's will be read. Again, you should have discussed it freely at interview with good examples and you should have demonstrated at the interview through oral communication, eye contact, body language and tone of your voice already. It is almost possible to change a person's 1st impression about you obtained in the 1st 30 seconds. Communicaiton was done. Why repeat? It is not fair competition that you would rely on a thank you letter at a later time to make up for your communication not sufficienly demonstrated at the time of interview.
Instead, why don't you briefly mention one thing that does interest you from talk with hr/mgr to
1.make your letter personal
2. show that you are proactive with new information and you effectively listened, understodd and reflected
2.build continuous rapport,
"再次表达你对获取该职位的热情"--->yes, need to do so, but do it with style. Be very confident and express it in a polite but silently aggressive way. e.g " I look forward to hearing from you soon as this position is top listed among my other job applications. Should you need any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me by ...."
At last, don't forget to add a nice wish with some personal touch, say, if HR has mentioned to you that she will be on vacation soon in Cuba, say "wish you enjoy you a lovely cruise in Cuba!" the more specific the better. Such personal attention would win a heart a bit.更多精彩文章及讨论,请光临枫下论坛 rolia.net